diff --git a/bitwarden_rs/readme.md b/bitwarden_rs/readme.md
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--- a/bitwarden_rs/readme.md
+++ b/bitwarden_rs/readme.md
@@ -15,13 +15,15 @@ Password manager.
 Bitwarden is a modern popular open source password manager
 with wide cross platform support.
 
-But the official Bitwarden server is not really fit for smaller deployment and
-requires Microsoft SQL server among other things.</br>
+But the official Bitwarden server is bit over-engineered,
+requiring Microsoft SQL server among other things,
+which makes it not an ideal fit for smaller deployments
+
 So here is where Bitwarden_rs by Daniel García comes in.</br>
 It is a Bitwarden API implementation written in Rust.
 It's very resource efficient, uses about 10MB of RAM,
 and close to no CPU.</br>
-It's build using Rocket a web framework for Rust
+It's build using Rocket, a web framework for Rust,
 and user data are stored in a simple sqlite database file.
 
 All the client apps are still officials coming from bitwarden,